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New Years Renku
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Observing cycles,
internal and external -
understanding sought.

Posted on: 2005/1/10 14:33
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Re: New Years Renku
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Phlux wrote:
Observing cycles,
internal and external -
understanding sought.


As the year closed, I swept away bitterness and sorrow with the dust,
As the year opens, how do I draw in happiness and prosperity?

Posted on: 2005/1/13 2:29
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YuTaiSheng wrote:
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Phlux wrote:
Observing cycles,
internal and external -
understanding sought.


As the year closed, I swept away bitterness and sorrow with the dust,
As the year opens, how do I draw in happiness and prosperity?


the stress of the past,
closed like a rose before dawn,
the new sun rises.

Posted on: 2005/1/18 0:53
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Observing cycles,
internal and external -
understanding sought.

As the year closed, I swept away bitterness and sorrow with the dust,
As the year opens, how do I draw in happiness and prosperity?

the stress of the past,
closed like a rose before dawn,
the new sun rises;

Shining on my path,
Possibility revealed
in every moment.

Posted on: 2005/1/18 3:31
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Phlux wrote:
Observing cycles,
internal and external -
understanding sought.

As the year closed, I swept away bitterness and sorrow with the dust,
As the year opens, how do I draw in happiness and prosperity?

the stress of the past,
closed like a rose before dawn,
the new sun rises;


Inserted in here my Japanese verse:

uguisu hatsune mukaitarikeri

welcomed in, I come to see, by the first song of the warbler.

Luckily that verse does make a break so the sequence can still work. But now I have to write a response to Phlux's verse.

Posted on: 2005/1/18 3:42
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Phlux wrote:
Observing cycles,
internal and external -
understanding sought.

As the year closed, I swept away bitterness and sorrow with the dust,
As the year opens, how do I draw in happiness and prosperity?

the stress of the past,
closed like a rose before dawn,
the new sun rises;

uguisu hatsune mukaitarikeri
welcomed in, I come to see, by the first song of the warbler.

Shining on my path,
Possibility revealed
in every moment.


Gentlemanly virture, by its own accord, parts the mists and grasses;
An ancient path and secluded lands now appear before me.

Posted on: 2005/1/20 15:18
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Posted on: 2005/1/20 20:37
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On that note, let's end this sequence. There were a few laspes in communication that messed up the flow of the sequence. I'll take this one as a lesson on the role of timely communication in renku. Plus maybe I should explain the rules of renku so we can have a sequence that rotates. But that would mean no more Chinese verses, strictly Japanese verse on my part.

Posted on: 2005/1/22 1:52
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sorry if i stuffed it up for you, i'll delete my input and you could keep going, no?Quote:



YuTaiSheng wrote:
On that note, let's end this sequence. There were a few laspes in communication that messed up the flow of the sequence. I'll take this one as a lesson on the role of timely communication in renku. Plus maybe I should explain the rules of renku so we can have a sequence that rotates. But that would mean no more Chinese verses, strictly Japanese verse on my part.

Posted on: 2005/1/22 8:31
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No, it wasn't solely because of that. I wasn't able to devote time to the renku as I had hope. Time and communication played their parts too.

Posted on: 2005/1/24 7:21
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