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"A Path"
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Silence as the sound of the rising moon
winds brushing mother earth
Stepping slowly
blades drawn, towards hell
Staring eye to eye
intentions as powerful as loyalty
Death is calling.

Posted on: 2005/5/4 10:51
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Sorry, a bit "dark" for me

Posted on: 2005/5/5 1:34
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I like this. I got a great picture in my head from that, this kind of things make me wish I could draw or paint or anything like that to get that picture out of my head and on paper...

Posted on: 2005/5/5 1:54
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Sorry but...DARK? And this is comming from someone with the nick name Gollum? Is that like JRR Tulkin,s hobbit charicter? Well in my opinion, Pretty dark response to someones light hearted sharing of their inner most expressions of this art.

"It is interresting how we as humans cast our own shadows onto others paths."

Cant get much darker then that nick name either!

I am just not too poetic and I think the author did good job at putting a picture in my head. Any one of us could find ourselves to be on that "PATH" someday. Besides, it takes a little courage to post your creations for the whole world to see. Hell, what is light without a little darkness?! "Just razin ya! No disrespect intended." BUT...

Some things are just better left UNSAID.

Lantz

Posted on: 2005/5/5 4:10
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I like this, too
pretty cool

Posted on: 2005/5/5 4:38
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I am just not too poetic and I think the author did good job at putting a picture in my head. Any one of us could find ourselves to be on that "PATH" someday. Besides, it takes a little courage to post your creations for the whole world to see. Hell, what is light without a little darkness?! "Just razin ya! No disrespect intended." BUT...

Some things are just better left UNSAID.


Thanks for the comments. I didn't feel disrespected at all. I have a bunch of poems and I just threw this one in here. Maybe I'll post another one soon. Thanks again for the honesty. Take care and Happy Training.

Posted on: 2005/5/5 4:48
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I will look forward to them !!!

I just get sick of all the negativity that goes flying around sometimes here in kutaki. it's good that you were not offended...your poem was good! I defended it because "I" liked it.

Lantz

Posted on: 2005/5/5 5:11
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Who said i didn`t like it?, i just said it was a bit "dark" for me, anyway, you wait til i get my ring back then you`re for it!

Posted on: 2005/5/5 7:21
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hahaha...I deserved that! I admit. sorry I misunderstood you! Have a great day ! OH jsut a note..I liked Gollum! one of my favorites.
Lantz

Posted on: 2005/5/5 7:31
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