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In a writing mood
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I enjoy writing, and this is the only forum I belong to...
i.e. you all get bombarded by my writing sprees.

I call this one "The Scent of Blood" or
"Red40 + syryup makes me hungry for bloody pancakes"

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Warm air carries sweetness across my senses
Grasping me tightly yet lightly
Ever Tempting

One deep and dark scent of erotic mystery
Stirring thoughts without logic
Seductively Raw

Tangible to the touch, it drips from my fingers
Staining skin to crimson
Intense Aroma

With endless eagerness I breathe in once more
Penetrating within my restful form
Soothingly Calm

Beyond all moments composed of regret
This silken scent, a lingering caress
Gravely Hypnotic
Irresistibly Inviting

Posted on: 2007/6/23 14:49
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Re: In a writing mood
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Wow, several days now and no response.

Okay, I'm going to go out on a limb here and say that I like it.

Dolphins or no dolphins.

Posted on: 2007/6/28 15:22
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Re: In a writing mood
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Thanks man

hmmmm...I think I'm gonna have to write something about dolphins now just for the sake of it. haha.

Posted on: 2007/6/30 4:34
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Re: In a writing mood
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OK Dale, I'll also respond. I thought it was very expressive and well written, but it disturbed me a lot. Blood is a symbol of Life and when it is out of the body and flowing, dripping, seeping, it is Life leaving the body. Its' smell is the percursor of death. I never find that beautiful or seductive even though death is also part of life and that I think is why it disturbed me. Maybe it was supposed to.

Posted on: 2007/6/30 21:58
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Re: In a writing mood
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Thank you for the comment. I appreciate and encourage all interpretations.

One friend of mine called it "trippy" when discussing the imagery.
Another called it "provacative" because of the language and chance of deeper meanings.

I always enjoy seeing the many meanings that can be explored through a piece of writing because no interpretation is really wrong or right.

Posted on: 2007/7/1 5:45
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